【专项突破】2016 高考英语-短文改错集训（十五） <br />【专项突破】短文改错 <br />假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共 <br />有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 <br />增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 <br />删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 <br />修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 <br />注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； <br /> 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 <br />Passage 1 <br />On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the wet road. And <br />all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold <br />in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. <br />He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of the bus. He took <br />them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They <br />spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help. <br />Passage 2 <br />A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to <br />find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn&#039;t even giving the <br />chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. &quot;We <br />don&#039;t employ dishonest people in Germany&quot; is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he <br />arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and <br />was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all <br />keep in minds: honesty is the best policy. <br />Passage 3 <br />One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different from <br />the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed <br />seats. <br /> Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and <br />sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked <br />everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the <br />class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation <br /> <br />and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease. <br />Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go. <br />Passage 4 <br />Dear Mandy， <br /> Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard <br />because he wants me go to university. He thinks I&#039;m lazy，but it&#039;s not true. I work really hard， <br />often study late into the night！I&#039;ve tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work <br />as ha...