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2011年高考英语作文范文30篇(21-30) <br />F.看图作文: <br />(1) 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信 <br />请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住 <br />房面积为25平方米,月租500元。 <br />注意:1.词数:100左右: <br />2.参考词汇:房租&mdash;Tent(n.). <br />  I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to <br />China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao <br />Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you <br />there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor <br />with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. <br />There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small <br />flat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your <br />wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to <br />me and I will look for another better place. <br />  Hope you will come here soon! <br />  All the best! <br />Yours, <br />Li Hua <br />满分理由 <br />  本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还 <br />使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场 <br />佳作。 <br />Dear Bob, <br />  Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you. <br />  I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It <br />is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a <br />bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house <br />is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month. <br />  Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 <br />bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you <br />please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport,    <br />see you. <br />  Best wishes ! <br />Yours, <br />Li Hua <br />满分理由 <br />  本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾 <br />末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。 <br />Dear Bob, <br />  How are you these days? <br />  I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked <br />me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The <br />place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop <br />away from Jianxin Chinese School. <br />  There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is <br />not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is <br />500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for <br />you. <br />Yours, <br />Li Hua <br />满分理由 <br />  本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句 <br />运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。 <br />(2) 请看下面的这幅漫画,再联想实际生活,写一篇短文,词数120左右。题目:Don’t Waste <br />Water <br /> ...

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