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晨 诵 篇 目 <br />1、表达观点类 <br /> 在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语,还是英语、汉语兼用?某英语杂志社就此话题邀请 <br />中学生发表看法。请围绕&ldquo;How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or <br />in both English and Chinese?&rdquo;这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。 <br />授课形式一:只用英语 <br />  优点:有助于提高听说能力等 <br />  缺憾:不易听懂等 <br />  结论:&hellip;&hellip; <br />授课形式二:英语、汉语兼用 <br />  优点:易于理解等 <br />  缺憾:英语氛围不浓等 <br />  结论:&hellip;&hellip; <br />注意:1.词数 100~120,短文开头已给出(不计词数)。 <br /> 2.参考词汇:atmosphere 氛围 <br /> I prefer my English classes to be taught in... <br />满分文(一) <br />  I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is <br />that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches <br />the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we <br />get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us. <br />  However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. <br />Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed. <br />  Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. <br />It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture. <br />名师点评: <br />  审题是作文的第一要素,本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。 <br />本文运用多种复杂句式,整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语 <br />的使用也很地道,可以参看好句中的分析。 <br />背诵内容: <br />好词 1.advantage n.优点 2.be familiar with,对某人熟悉 3. atmosphere n.气氛 <br />1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is <br />that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. <br />  我更喜欢采用双语教学,其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。 <br /> 2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed. <br />满分文(二) <br />  I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to <br />improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in <br />English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English <br />so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are <br />all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we <br />need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also <br />using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand. <br />名师点评: <br />  本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用,将作者的意思表达得完整而 <br />准确,从而映衬了词汇的重要性;其次,本文的句式以复杂句为主,表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分 <br />到位。 <br />应背好词:1. immerse v.沉浸 2. explanation n.解释 3. make progress 取得进步 <br />应背好句:1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be <br />t...

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